Is this part of a story good?

if you want my honest opinion, if this was a real book that was published, I'd be a bit bored and be unwilling to continue. What made me a bit intrigued was the name Mickey Mouse. Because it made me wonder if this was a story about the actual Mickey, or was he mocked because of the name or he had similarities to Mickey etc. But you know, that's what I got from the paragraphs. If I knew what would happen afterwards, I would change my mind. It also depends on how long this story's going to be. If this is a lengthy story, then this would be a pretty okay start. But if this was a short one, I'd say this was too long. Because if you were reading a long book then it would obviously have a lot of detail. Good Luck!